Hello everyone! I, Christopher Peterson, have decided to make a story section. See who wins. Make sure your version of Charlie and the Chocolate Factoryis in a form of a script and be sure you add new characters: Veronica Gloop (Augustus Gloop's gluttonous sister), Tommy Salt (Veruca's Spoiled twin brother), Johnny Beauregard (Violet's gum-addicted brother), Tian Teavee (Mike's television-obsessed sister), an d Tootie Bucket (Charlie's sister). And make sure you alter the rooms in Ronald Dahl's story as fallows:
- The Chocolate Room: The garden made of candy shall be either smaller or bigger than any other garden. And the the pipes shall be as thin as a rake.
- The Inventing Room: Add your machine that your own candy. And give this room and other machines some color.
- The Nut Room: Please add alot of chutes.
- WonkaVison: The Camera shall be 50 ft taller than a normal one.
Mike Teavee: [Points to his sister who presses a few buttons, then stand infront of the camera] Look! We're gonna be the first poeple ever to be sent by television.
Tian: [as she and Mike begin to dissappear as the lights from the camera lense shine on them] See you later [echoing] alligator, gator, gator, gator!
Mr.Teavee [Screaming in panic] THEY'RE GONE!?
[Augustus and Veronica get stuck in a pipe and struggles to get free. Then WHOOF! They shoot upward, their screaming slowly fades out.]
Mrs. Gloop: They disappeared!
Mr. Gloop: [Panic goes out-of-control] Call a Plumber, call the th police, call th fire brigade, do something or our children will be mashed like a marshmellow.
Wonka: [angrily] WHY DO YOU EVEN THINK THAT!? THAT PIPE GOES TO THE CHOCOLATE SMELTING ROOM!
Mrs. Gloop [gulps]
[An Ooompa-Loompa comes over]
Wonka: Please take the couple to the Chocolate Smelting Room, before their kids get chilled to a -120(o) Ferenhite, or was that celsius? Well anways,if that happens the chocolate will trap them.
The winner will get a chance to make his/her own wiki.
A Random and Uncredited StoryEdit
Mr Wonka: "Okay, children. First we will go to my most beloved creation: The Chocolate Room, (the crowd stands in aw) See my Chocolate River? Ten thousand Gallons an hour. An the pipes suck it up carry them to every room here.
Veronica: Can we eat anything?
Wonka: Eat Anything? Of course! It is HUGE! It is bigger than the largest garden in the world! Here it is.
Johnny: Is there any gum?
Violet: Yeah, what he said.
Mike: Is there a television set around here?
Wonka: No. It is better.
Charlie & Tootie: Is it chocolate?
Tommy: Daddy, I want my chocolate now!
Veruca: Me too!
Mr. Salt: Something's moving over there! Who are they?
Wonka: Oompa Loompas from Loompaland, of course and oh, what a jungle it is. Nothing but Wangadoodles, and Vermicous Knids.
Veruca: Look! LOOK! The Gloop kids are drink
Augustus: This is so creamy and delicious!
Wonka: Nooo! Wait! It is now contaminated!
(Veronica and Augustus fall in and get sucked up the pipe.)
Mr. Gloop: Help us! Save them!